Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 27 November 2018

Why Celebrities should have more privacy rights.

How would you feel if your phone number was put up on the internet?. What would you do if walking down the road only to find people screaming taking photos of you?. This is one of the scenarios that celebrities go through every day, even if it is on a trip to the pools or a walk with your dog, you will instantly make headlines in a magazine or the news! So how would you feel? What would you do if this happens to you?


There was a case in America when some YouTubers were moving house.
So their house was posted up on the internet for sale.
One week later fans started to go to the YouTubers house
(that they still lived in at the time) and stole things from them,
videoing them privately and posting it on social media!
This got out of hand as they were trespassing, breaking and entering and more!
So what would you do? How would you feel?
This is just one example of an invasion of privacy.


Journalists write what is sold to them.
Say I sold them a story on Taylor Swift and how she died and it was really juicy.
That would write about because it’s unthinkable, it will draw in the super fans in.
Its a cycle, we buy the magazines the place you buy the magazines from buying more of
the brand and the magazines get money, lots and lots of money.


Did you hear that Taylor Swift is pregnant?
Did you know that Oprah and Ellen got into a fight?
Well, these are just some of the headlines that appear in daily magazines.
Like come on these are just hoxes that is not true.
Some things in magazines are true but most of the headlines are luring you into reading them,
it’s like a kid with lollies really.
These uncivilized people make up lies about celebrities to either drag them down or get better ratings! Isn't that astonishing!


This is just wrong. This should not be tolerated! How would you feel to have a total invasion
of privacy? I mean, of course, they are beautiful beings that we may idol and look up to,
but that is still no reason to stalk them and spread rumors about them!
This is all wrong, join me in my fight to earn these miraculous human beings some privacy!

Lately, we have been learning about persuasive writing. This is my persuasive writing, It is about how Calebrities should have more privacy rights.

Friday, 14 September 2018

Raymond Huber

A few days ago an amazing author came to visit our school when he came to our class I knew I would learn some awesome tips on how to make my writing better... And I did! 

Imagine

Write 
Edit
He says that we should follow these steps to begin and end a story.
I learnt a lot, thank you Raymond Huber

Thursday, 30 August 2018

Today we had the Mini-B-B fair (the Mini Books and Baking fair) It was so awesome they had the best baking and the most interesting books! They had fudge brownies, cookies, cake and more! it was a really fun day.

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Wednesday, 29 August 2018

Narwhals

Do you know what the unicorn of the sea is? Well it has a horn like a unicorn, It’s a Narwhal!


Narwhals are exotic creatures with smooth silver maktaaq (that means skin), they swim through the ocean with a magestacil horn, like a unicorn! So have you heard of a Narwhal? If you haven't swim along with me and you’ll see just how awesome Narwhals  are.

But Narwhals don’t swim in just any waters, the can be found in the cold ocean waters of Canada, Greenland, Norway and Russia. These waters are perfect for the Narwhals because they have so much blubber it takes up 40% of their mass!

But what do Narwhals eat to give them the knowledge and strength so that half of their brain is awake when the other is asleep! Let's find out. A proper diet of a Narwhal is squid, Greenland halibut, shrimp and flounder this keeps them healthy and strong so they can stay underwater for 29 minutes!

Narwhals are very endangered because people want their magestacle horns. They also have killer whales predators but mainly us humans are the ones who are endangering them. But on the bright side they also reproduce, Female narwhals are pregnant for 14 months and always give birth in spring. Their Calfs 1.5 meters long! Like humans Narwhals can give birth to more than one calf. Narwhals give birth to a calf once every three years.

Narwhals are amazing creatures that we shouldn’t hunt or poach just because we want their beautiful horn for artifacts. because once we wipe out the Narwhals you can never bring them back.

Wednesday, 11 April 2018

My poem about the storm

The Storm

I see the howling wind mercilessly blowing.

I smell burnt wood with a hint of fear.

I taste bitterness in my mouth and its not going away.

I hear crashing trees and crackling burnt wood.

I touch the cold walls in the hallway and sudden chill goes up my spine and I feel scared wondering what will happen next.
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Tuesday, 10 April 2018

My First Day At School

Walking past the gates dressed up culottes on hat on. walking in with lulu and seeing my teacher for the first time wow I thought school is cool :(nope): I have been wanting to come for ages because my brother said it really fun and you don't have to do work.Little did I know that that was a lie… the first day was good mainly because we didn't stay for long we stayed for an hour
or more.

Day two okay we did a little bit of work that day but nothing that me and my awesome class couldn't handle as the days went on and on I got use to the work and I got use to the class and marked a very important day of my life.  

Friday, 6 April 2018

Mantra

Its okay to be a glow stick sometimes you need to break before you shine.
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We are writing Mantras. Why you may ask because they make you feel good. And this is what I intend to do with these Mantras. Make you and everyone who reads this feel good.

Wednesday, 4 April 2018

Recount: My Trip to Australia

When we got to our hotel room I was dazzled. Marble floor, massive living room. Wow, I thought, this is the life. Walking out on the balcony was nerve-wracking because I'm afraid of heights but seeing that there was swimming pool got me really excited so... I got in my togs, dragged my mum down the elevator and raced to the swimming pool. But then I heard waves. I looked to my left. No way, I thought, a beach!! Well that's awesome. Waking up to this every morning was a dream. I'm glad that we go back every second year for a family reunion.

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Thursday, 15 March 2018

The countryside

The countryside was usual enough it had:

A dirt road,a well,an old rusty shed, and a big field with a warped willow tree my family and I had picnics under. My cousins brother and I do what kids do,pretended to push each other into the well,snooping around the wizards shack,jumped into the pond,and took the horses up to the hills to watch the mesmerizing sunset and finding our way back with a old clanky torch.

Doing memorable things.